Re: [rfa/rfc] Revised multi-arch process

["Eli Zaretskii" <eliz at is dot elta dot co dot il>]

> Date: Wed, 15 May 2002 02:58:25 -0400
> From: Andrew Cagney <ac131313@cygnus.com>
> 
> (It also adds it do the doco, Eli?)

Thanks for the heads up, I'm hard-pressed for free time lately, so
might miss docs patches sometimes.  Please ping if I do.

I have a few minor comments:

> +@section Converting an existing Target Architecture to Multi-arch

Suggest an index entry here.  Something like

  @cindex converting targets to multi-arch

> +This section describes the current accepted best practice for converting
> +an an existing target architecture to the multi-arch framework.

The ``an'' is doubled here.

> +@item
> +Enable multi-arch level one
> +
> +@item
> +Delete one or more files

These two @item's need to end with a period, since the other two do.

> +There isn't a size limit on a patch, however, more smaller patches are
> +strongly encouraged.

I think ``more'' is redundant.

> +Temporally set @code{GDB_MULTI_ARCH} to GDB_MULTI_ARCH_PARTIAL and then

GDB_MULTI_ARCH_PARTIAL should be in @code.

Otherwise, okay; thanks.